195. Imagine that you are going to open a restaurant. Describe it and the menu.
Walking pass the busy window shopping road and came across a restaurant with purple and black stripes as the color of the building. Looking at it closer, a clear window everywhere makes it relaxing and become larger in size with the see-through look. There are also flower pots and vases everywhere. When look just above the glass door, light brown and baby pink letters arranged read Choco Lovers. As soon as opening the door, entering into the shop, the smell of rich chocolates come flying around as if it is welcoming the newcomer. Many small glass tables are set along with fancy fairy tale looking chairs. Inside of the shop is filled with more flowers, even the wall paper are picture of pretty looking flowers. Along the walls are paintings and pictures of melted chocolates, chocolate ice-cream, chocolate cakes, chocolates, and anything edible that is made out of chocolates.
The restaurant sounds like a perfect place for people who love chocolates but unfortunately I'm not one of them. If I did love chocolates I would definitely be a regular customer.
ReplyDeleteI was a little confused while reading these sentences:
"Walking pass the busy window shopping road and came across a restaurant with purple and black stripes as the color of the building"
"As soon as opening the door, entering into the shop, the smell of rich chocolates come flying around as if it is welcoming the newcomer. "
Both the sentences sound very odd probably because of the tense.
The restaurant seems like a great place for someone like you that loves chocolate. Although I like chocolate, I think your chocolate cafe would be too much chocolate for me, but no worries, I would come and eat at your shop.:)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Khak Khak as you need to work on your tenses and making sure the sentences flow. It's a little challenging to fully understand what you're explaining cause your thoughts don't flow. Advice from me: read it over next time before you post because it can really help correct mistakes like your tenses, etc.
Before i got to the last paragraph,in which you mentioned the other items on the menu, it sounded too chocolate-y. But, we have no say in it as it's your restaurant and you may like it perfectly the way it is. :D
ReplyDeleteI would come to that shop everyday and enjoy the richness of chocolate!!!
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